As you may have read I am starting to write the sequel to Vantastic France, so here is a tiny snippet that I have been working on. I feel a couple of swear words do fit in with the dialogue, I mean how many builders do not swear.
Your feedback on limited use of swear words would be most welcome.
‘Shaun took another step forward, ‘listen again pal, we are registered builders, S&D builders Ltd, so less of the cowboy crap.’
Barry started laughing again, ‘so let me get this straight then, S&D builders.’
‘Yeh, what’s so funny about that,’ said Dave.
‘Well I am just trying to work out who is who!’
‘It’s easy dickhead, I am Shaun and he’s Dave, is that too f’kin simple for you mate.’
No mate it’s not, but as you are called S&D builder I thought that meant like you act, ‘Stupid and Dopey’, so like I said; I was just trying to work out who was who but I think I’ve got is sussed now, so stupid, like I said before get outa my way. ‘
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